This week the children decided that they would like to use the computers to create a non-chronological report. They wrote about a very vicious Viking called Leif Erikson!
Hi Ashton and Keira, 2D are writing non-chronological reports this week in Literacy and we thought that you had written a great example of an introduction. Here is our 2 ticks and a wish. (tick) Title clearly stated what we are going to read about (tick) Good use of sub headings (wish) Re read some of you work especially the last sentence to check it makes sense.
Hi Ashton and Keira,
ReplyDelete2D are writing non-chronological reports this week in Literacy and we thought that you had written a great example of an introduction. Here is our 2 ticks and a wish.
(tick) Title clearly stated what we are going to read about
(tick) Good use of sub headings
(wish) Re read some of you work especially the last sentence to check it makes sense.
Thank you for sharing this work with us.