This week Year 3 have been learning about the coronation of Queen Elizabeth. We watched a section of the coronation and thought very carefully about what happened and how she might have felt. We then wrote a diary entries pretending to be Queen Elizabeth.
Dear Diary,
Today was a special day because I became the Queen! First they gave me a brilliant gold robe. Have you ever seen such a gold robe? I felt embarrassed but I felt exquisite. Then I was handed a golden glittery sceptre. Suddenly the crown was brought to me on a soft fluffy pillow. The glittery golden crown was placed on my head and I was Queen!
From Queen Elizabeth (Vanessa)
Well done! I could see you used powerful adjectives such as exquisite and feelings
ReplyDeleteWell done! we really like how you have used your alliteration and punctuation.
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