This week the children created their own boat to replace Titanic in the story 'Titanicat'. Can you spot the five senses in Ashton's writing?
Have you ever seen such a snowy white boat. While the turquoise waves smash on the gorgeous boat it sails dramatically. Occasionally, the boat suffocates in the freezing cold bubbly, blue sea. The smell of rotten salmon invades my nose. The boat tastes of the salt from the cold, freezing sea. The windows shiver because the freezing cold salt water splashes them like a speed boat sprinting through the sea. The boat hears the waves splashing. Ashton (3B)
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