Thursday 20 November 2014

​This week the children have been writing Viking narratives. They imagined and described their own terrifying Viking character. We hope that you enjoy reading them!


Banging into battle his rough skim rattled like a toy. Swish! Splosh! The Viking battled among the mud. Whilst he walks among the long road it smells like rotten fish. His boat smells like the sweat of a hard working man. If you go near him it will make you feel sick.
Diya

Charging into battle, this disgusting Viking is carrying an axe which is shiny. Because he has been to war he knew how to fight. Have you ever seen a red river of blood? Slowly, his tatty clothes fall down in the wind.

Squelch! Whilst he walks he is concocting a plan. His brown leather shoes sink into the stony mud. I can hear his voice roaring across the deserted village because he killed all the people.

Whilst he plods the smell of stale sweat and the blood of the people he has killed invades my nose.
Connor 

1 comment:

  1. I enjoyed your use of onomatopoeia - Rachael (4E)
    Great simile - "His boat smells like the sweat of a hard working man." - Alex C (4E)
    I liked how you used your five senses, including smell. - Rebecca (4E)

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