This week Year 4 will be rewriting the myth of the Two Dragons. We will be changing the Dragons into our own villains. Here is an example of our descriptions.
Slice, the slimy, scaly octopus stretches his tentacles. his bobbly plunger like tentacles feel like a hoover. His eyes are as big and black as a bowling ball.
Raged, he shoots his ink delicately into the sky. As soon as his enemy appears he uses his navy ink. His pale purple skin is camouflaged in the deep, dark sea.
Tia (4E)
I like how you the simile "his bobbly plunger like tentacles feel like a hoover. Ellen (4E)
ReplyDeletei like your alliteration e.g. slimy and scaly
ReplyDeleteyashashvi ( 4E )