This week Year 4 have been designing dragons. Here is an example of one of our descriptions. We have been focusing on different openers. Which opener your favourite?
When he is in the mood, the horrible hornisaur silently stalks its prey. This dreadful monster has horns like an antelope and a mouth like a gecko.
Roooarrr! The huge, horrid hornisaur growls like a snoozing giant. He has a raging personality. Suddenly the hornisaur sprouts his wings to fly high into the bright blue sky.
Georgia 4E
On his face he has a tattoo of a dragon however it is green a mouldy like seaweed. As he swings his arms his large fist flies around. Sometimes his found head changes shape. I discovered that he a ring that shoots out lasers, which make you evil. Important things to him include peanut butter and jelly sandwiches.
Aaron 4E
Aaron, I like how you used 'however'. Temitola (4E)
ReplyDeleteGreat onomatopoeia Georgia. Rachael (4E)
Aaron, I liked how you used 'which' to add information. Joshua (4E)